10 details that spoil a good fanfic

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I do not consider myself a good writer. I think I'm far from it. Only wrote four fanfic (actually were 5, but deleted one).
But I read a lot. And I decided to show the most coomus mistakes I see. I will not say the name of fanfics, not to hurt anyone.


01) Characters very
OOC. =>A little OOC's kind of cool. The problem is when it exceeds the limits and we were asking ourselves "who is this guy?"

02) Not say that the universe fanfic goes. =>I've read a fanfic that seemed to pass the universe Transformers G1 but Airachnid was in the plot and the description of Megatron, Bumblebee and Starscream looked like the Animated Universe
. It may seem silly, but I like having the head which is the voice and the appearance of the characters. With this mixture of the universe, I get confused.






03) Put dispensable details during a fanfic
mature.=>We're reading a hot fanfic and suddenly, appears a detail in midsentence that breaks the mood. Not good, right?



04) Super perfect characters.=> Okay a character that can do a lot of things, but have to balance having a lot of defects. EX: Is it pretty? Perhaps it should be temperamental. It is good in sports? Maybe not so good in some school materials. This will make the character real.

05)Stories without paragraph. May seem simple, but it makes a big difference a text without paragraph.

06)Characters without personality.=> EX: the author say that the character has a strong personality and temperamental, but writing is docile as a kitten. Have to know how to write characters.

07)Writers who always use the same end.=> I admit that the end of fanfics must be the hardest part, but not because an end pleased, which will use the same in all. Then gets bland.

08)Do not give a description of the OC characters.=> We do not know the characters, is nescessario there is a good description of him.

09)Describe serious moments without the necessary emotion.=> I remember a fanfic where the main character was given a very serious news, but the way it was described, it seemed that she was talking about a normal subject.

10)Stories races. This type of fanfic it seems that the author was in a hurry to write and wrote anyway, but ended up leaving several details behind.


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