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I do not consider myself a good writer. I think I'm far from it. Only wrote four fanfic (actually were 5, but deleted one).
But I read a lot. And I decided to show the most coomus mistakes I see. I will not say the name of fanfics, not to hurt anyone.
01) Characters very
But I read a lot. And I decided to show the most coomus mistakes I see. I will not say the name of fanfics, not to hurt anyone.
01) Characters very
OOC. =>A little OOC's kind of cool. The problem is when it exceeds the limits and we were asking ourselves "who is this guy?"
02) Not say that the universe fanfic goes. =>I've read a fanfic that seemed to pass the universe Transformers G1 but Airachnid was in the plot and the description of Megatron, Bumblebee and Starscream looked like the Animated Universe
. It may seem silly, but I like having the head which is the voice and the appearance of the characters. With this mixture of the universe, I get confused.
03) Put dispensable details during a fanfic
mature.=>We're reading a hot fanfic and suddenly, appears a detail in midsentence that breaks the mood. Not good, right?
04) Super perfect characters.=> Okay a character that can do a lot of things, but have to balance having a lot of defects. EX: Is it pretty? Perhaps it should be temperamental. It is good in sports? Maybe not so good in some school materials. This will make the character real.
05)Stories without paragraph. May seem simple, but it makes a big difference a text without paragraph.
06)Characters without personality.=> EX: the author say that the character has a strong personality and temperamental, but writing is docile as a kitten. Have to know how to write characters.
07)Writers who always use the same end.=> I admit that the end of fanfics must be the hardest part, but not because an end pleased, which will use the same in all. Then gets bland.
08)Do not give a description of the OC characters.=> We do not know the characters, is nescessario there is a good description of him.
09)Describe serious moments without the necessary emotion.=> I remember a fanfic where the main character was given a very serious news, but the way it was described, it seemed that she was talking about a normal subject.
10)Stories races. This type of fanfic it seems that the author was in a hurry to write and wrote anyway, but ended up leaving several details behind.
05)Stories without paragraph. May seem simple, but it makes a big difference a text without paragraph.
06)Characters without personality.=> EX: the author say that the character has a strong personality and temperamental, but writing is docile as a kitten. Have to know how to write characters.
07)Writers who always use the same end.=> I admit that the end of fanfics must be the hardest part, but not because an end pleased, which will use the same in all. Then gets bland.
08)Do not give a description of the OC characters.=> We do not know the characters, is nescessario there is a good description of him.
09)Describe serious moments without the necessary emotion.=> I remember a fanfic where the main character was given a very serious news, but the way it was described, it seemed that she was talking about a normal subject.
10)Stories races. This type of fanfic it seems that the author was in a hurry to write and wrote anyway, but ended up leaving several details behind.
Alita Battle Angel Review
I recently watched this movie. My thoughts? "Finally a live-action manga adaptation that is good!"
Since I read the mangá, maybe my opinion will be different from someone that just heard about the movie. But my parents watched too and got very interested in the story.
What can I say about the movie?
Fist of all, I remember when the movie trailers where being posted online. Everybody talked about Alita's eyes. They said that where weird and creepy and so fake. But, as the time passed and more trailers come, the opinion started to change.
I say that, although the eyes look weird at first glance, after some time you start to think the t
I saw the Bumblebee movie, and...
IT IS THE BEST TRANSFORMERS MOVIE EVER!!!!
(Spoiler free)
I recently watched the new Transformers movie, "Bumblebee". And now I'm asking myself; "Why did it take so long to make a good Transformers movie?"
Why this film is so good compared to the others? First all, the Transformers finally received a personality. In the other movies, only Optimus Prime and even Bumblebee had more personality, the other were just a caricature. The Decepticons for instance, where just a bunch of psychopathic puppets that where in the movies, just to be killed. But in this movie, they finally have personalities.
Then, we have a human character that's likab
Hello 2019!
Happy new Year for everybody!
2018 was a year of many ups and downs; My grandmother died, my niece was born, our dog that spend 13 years with us passed away, my sister is building her house.... But I can't say it was a bad year. Everything was in balance. Bad things happened, but also really good things happened. So, I hope this next year became something similar. Bad things and good things in the right measure.
100 OC Quiz: Miko/Shadow
Although Miko is not a Original Character, in my new Fanfic "Not Alone; After Story", she had change a lot of her personality, so I made the Quiz to help me understand a little bit more about her in the story.
I just changed the last question, because the original didn't add anything about her.
Part 1: The Basics
1. What is your full name?
Miko Nakadai. My married name was Miko Koyabashi (call me by this name and prepare to fell lots of pain). Now, I respond by the name “Shadow”.
2. Where and when were you born?
I was born in March 29 of 1995.* Tokyo, Japan.
3. Who are/were your parents? (Know their names, occupations, per
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