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I do not consider myself a good writer. I think I'm far from it. Only wrote four fanfic (actually were 5, but deleted one).
But I read a lot. And I decided to show the most coomus mistakes I see. I will not say the name of fanfics, not to hurt anyone.


01) Characters very
OOC. =>A little OOC's kind of cool. The problem is when it exceeds the limits and we were asking ourselves "who is this guy?"

02) Not say that the universe fanfic goes. =>I've read a fanfic that seemed to pass the universe Transformers G1 but Airachnid was in the plot and the description of Megatron, Bumblebee and Starscream looked like the Animated Universe
. It may seem silly, but I like having the head which is the voice and the appearance of the characters. With this mixture of the universe, I get confused.






03) Put dispensable details during a fanfic
mature.=>We're reading a hot fanfic and suddenly, appears a detail in midsentence that breaks the mood. Not good, right?



04) Super perfect characters.=> Okay a character that can do a lot of things, but have to balance having a lot of defects. EX: Is it pretty? Perhaps it should be temperamental. It is good in sports? Maybe not so good in some school materials. This will make the character real.

05)Stories without paragraph. May seem simple, but it makes a big difference a text without paragraph.

06)Characters without personality.=> EX: the author say that the character has a strong personality and temperamental, but writing is docile as a kitten. Have to know how to write characters.

07)Writers who always use the same end.=> I admit that the end of fanfics must be the hardest part, but not because an end pleased, which will use the same in all. Then gets bland.

08)Do not give a description of the OC characters.=> We do not know the characters, is nescessario there is a good description of him.

09)Describe serious moments without the necessary emotion.=> I remember a fanfic where the main character was given a very serious news, but the way it was described, it seemed that she was talking about a normal subject.

10)Stories races. This type of fanfic it seems that the author was in a hurry to write and wrote anyway, but ended up leaving several details behind.


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TsukinoNekoHime
Draw is my life!
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Brazil
Hello!
Well, first, sorry for my english. Normally I prefer writing to speak, but as English is not my native language, I speak better than I write.

* I am a quiet girl. A bit lazy and very, very shy.

* I am the type that pays not to go to parties or places hectic and crowded. I'd rather stay at home, drawing, listening to music or watching movies.

* I'm left handed.

* Everyone thinks I'm younger than I look.

* I am an atheist. Be adults and accept that and I will accept their religions.

* I have a sister seven years older than me.

* I love the show Transformers Prime!

* I love the passion, manga. This is my style of drawing.

* I like movies romantic comedies, musicals and adventure. But it depends on the movie.

* I live in a small town in southern Brazil.

* My favorite colors are: Red, black, blue and silver.

MORE ABOUT ME:
Brazilian Stamp by helder, STAMP: Glasses by Emotikonz , , Otaku stamp by Okami-Moony , I Draw Transformers stamp by Lady-Autobot17 , Day Dreamer Stamp by Sora05 , Listen - Stamp by JWiesner , I imagine with music Stamp by tastelessfate , Stamp - Lazy by DragoN-FX , Typing Stamp by In-The-Machine , Fantasy+RealLife Stamp by Monkey-Girl146 , "Explaining" Stamp by Sonira-Stamps , I Hate Math by l8 , Shower by MaruLovesStamps , Happiness by MaruLovesStamps , I don't have formal education in art but... by ERA-7 , Stamp Teleport by TheSaltyMonster , Watch me stamp by ERA-7 , Can't stop deviantart-ing by prosaix , Lacking Ideas by fear-the-brilliance .

Stamp - Comics by AzraelleWormser <--Someone will say is a lie?

THINGS I LOVE:
I Love Manga by NasikaSakura , Fanart stamp by katthekat , My Silent Night by yumi-honamaru , TF Girls stamp by Metallikato .
(This is so true)
Stamp: Transformers Prime by Araktugage , TFP Optimus stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Megatron stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Bumblebee stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Wheeljack stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Knockout stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Soundwave stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Smokescreen stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Dreadwing stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Shockwave stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Predaking stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Magnus stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Ratchet stamp by D-NightRain, TFP Bulkhead stamp by D-NightRain , TFP Breakdown stamp by D-NightRain, TFP Arcee Stamp by Aurora-Starlet , TFP Starscream stamp by D-NightRain <-- he is not my really fav character, but I don't hate him, either.
DAMN IT BULKHEAD by Frazero <-- Hilarious!
Awww look at Sari by Metallikato <-- I love her as a child and a teenager --> Sari Transform Stamp by cookiegirl14
<---I soo looove this show! Joeys weird eyecontact stamp by x-Acre-x
The Big Bang Theory Stamp 4 by Dekaff <--Very funny too!
Community Stamp by vagcat <-not that funny, but is ok.
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FudgeNugget Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the fave~! Theres plenty more KakaSaku fanart and such in my gallery ^^
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:iconsparkleeyeyuiplz: Hello, there :3 THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE FAVE ON

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Also, if you like my art, feel free to check out the rest of my gallery and watch me if you would like.

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Thank you for the favorite!!
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TmntLover111 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello! I am here to show you my TFP OC I have now. Meet, Firestriker! gingalover123.deviantart.com/a… Also, I have her bee the sparkmate with Soundwave, soooo, yeah, that is a thing.
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THank you :D

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You got hugged :iconplzhug: !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks for the fav!! n.n
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TsukinoNekoHime Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome. Your lhama is so cute!
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